Whether cities are better than countrysides or visa-versa has been always a question since the places where people live in affect greatly their lifestyles, education, civilizations and myriad of other central elements, therefore people opine differently when it comes to the best place to live. Some prefer cities for the matter of great facilities, better job opportunities etc while others stand opposite to it and they choose villages due to the quaint environment and healthiness. Good to mention that both opinions have their own pros and cons and neither of them is in the peak condition.
There is no doubt that a city offers a greater life from some aspects. advanced educational system, almost well health services, more job diversity with further incomes, remarkable shopping malls, the recreational locations and easier access to new technoligies are cases in point. Furthermore, you learn to coexist with people from all walks of life, of different races, nationalities, castes and cultures and start respecting dissimilarities, whereas in suburbs, these required facilities are absent, thus suburbanites are less tolerant, civilized and open minded than urbanites.
In today world, a vast number of peoples migrate to urban areas in order to live a better life, but indeed, it is risking a life and limb. City dwellers are always under tremendous pressure and stress, busy with updating themselves with the latest technology and have no time to draw comfort from it. Additionally, the majority of the population suffer from various disorders, such as heart diseases, asthma ,depressions and many other prevalent illnesses, thanks to adulterated food, chemically grown vegetables, different types of pollution and high level of stress. Villagers, in contrary, are much healthier. They breathe in fresh air and have organic food and pure water. Moreover, great deal of traffic jam, rapid population growth, cost of living, homelessness, crimes and corruptions are considerable issues that rural inhabitants would never face up. As a result they have a peaceful, wholesome and safe life.
To conclude, choosing a living place seems to be a life choice for it is still in dispute, but in my point of view, city life is more preferable, because, in general, I am a person who likes to be updated and connected to modern world.However, rural areas, unfortunately, lacks the international standard of healthcare and education.
- Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this. 79
- Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- Today many young people are moving from rural areas to cities. Why is this. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.? 95
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, in general, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.359375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00288760768 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6640625 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.4742703338 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0888536902448 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262972612869 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288448863678 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474037053719 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272242159739 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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