Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
I disagree with the statement and I think that technology has helped humans and of course children to be more creative.
first of all, in the past people lave not access to high-tech technologies and indeed the technologies in the past were so easy and primitive, but the technology in the today world has improved significantly. according to some researches that I read in some journals, the scientific improvement in today world is significantly higher in compare to past and according to those researches the advancement in technologies is one of the most important factors in this difference.
secondly, by using technology children would be able to learn thing so easily and use technologies to create and build whatever they have in their mind. for example my nephew like architecture and usually work with computer and uses education software such as softwares that allow him to design different type of building design. several days ago I saw a model that he had designed and I impressed because his model was very interesting and creative.
third, by using technologies, children have access to unlimited sources in every field they want. for example they can use internet to learn about the mechanism of automobile engines etc. for example my little brother like to create animals with paper and by using internet he learned about this art and now he is able to creates very beautiful paper works and he says that some of them are new and he himself learned how to create them, without the help of educational program in the internet.
fourth, technology has helped children to be more close to other people and now they can communicate with other children all around the world. they can talk about different things and exchange ideas and learn about other children. sometimes these communications helped them and improve their creativeness. a few days ago I saw a new about a creative invention of a fifteen years American old boy. he said that he has a friend in a Nigeria and they communicate with each other every day. He said that one day his friend talked about the water pollution problem of Nigerian people. After hearing the problem the American boy became interested in to this issue and after reading and researching a lot of articles, he found a creative solution for that problem.
In conclusion, I think that technology is helpful and necessary for improvement in children creativeness and without it the development of humans would decrease significantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00480769231 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85508927414 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490384615385 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8926182483 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.470588235 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4705882353 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194426585574 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695872173998 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632501199731 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118366441061 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053937287684 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.