Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is believed that some sporting events including the football world cup and Olympic Games have immense power in enhancing relationship among states and liberating patriotic feelings in such extreme cases by secure way. I personally agree with the statement and referring some arguments will be discussed further.
First of all, popular athletic occurrences serve nations to evaluate each other reasonably and bring them together. In fact, The Olympic Games is one of the most adequate samples of that how various states appreciate each other’s culture, traditions and religious by assembling in the city where the events occur. Ultimately, it could definitely reduce international pressures. Furthermore, the football world cup and other such phenomenon are the reasonable option to illustrate their patriotic feelings in an efficient method. Particularly, in the intense tournaments sporting representatives attempt to demonstrate the powerfulness and superiority of their nations by their capacity and patriotic spirit. Hence, these athletic occasions have maintained the peace among countries in a safe way.
Secondly, it is tremendous opportunity for some developing countries to stand on their feet as well as gain reputation amid states. For instance, although there were numerous capable sporting professionals in Brazil, they suffered from poverty, famine, lack of education and whatsoever. The football world cup submitted them to prove their best as a result Brazilian football team achieved three times astonishingly the world cup.
On the other hand, in some sports games losing gangs and their supporters neglect to control their emotional sentiments and induce some conflicts including bullying or disrespectful to the rival groups. Consequently, correlation among countries has weakened and they eliminate their esteem.
Having investigated the both aspects, it appears to me that popular athletic occurrence like the football world cup and other international games play a vital role to retain the world peace among nations as well as liberate patriotic emotions in a secure way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in fact, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71656050955 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01998999461 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5742287212 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.214285714 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246900205255 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781363359991 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634599549686 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140358506137 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678540515065 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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