Some people think it is more important to plant more tree in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In many parts of the world, there is a trend that people plant more and more trees in open urban areas. While I agree that this tendency has many benefits to the environment in general, I believe that it is more important to build houses and apartments in those areas.
On the one hand, the benefits of growing more green space in towns are indisputable. It is obvious that trees purify air, which significantly reduces dust generated by transportations and construction sites; therefore, air pollution will be partially decreased. Besides that, it also reduces noise pollution thanks to leaves’ capacity in sound distributing. Hence, generally, the living environment in urban areas will be greatly improved.
On the other hand, the lack of shelter will have many extreme drawbacks. Firstly, in urban areas, it will greatly raise the rental price because of the continuous increase in housing demand, which creates highly financial pressure to most of the people who are living there. As a result, more people can not afford an apartment, more social problems will appear, such as raising homeless and crime rate. Secondly, building houses in rural areas also has some negative effects on the economy. It is obvious that commuters will have to transport further and longer to work in city centres, which not only reduces their productivity but also wastes more expense for transport purposes.
In conclusion, planting trees in urban areas to protect the environment is very important. From my point of view, I believe it is more considerable to continue to construct houses in those areas. However, people should find efficient solutions to balance between housing demand and environmental protection instead of sacrificing on of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23131672598 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80759237463 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3694272719 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256982508263 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903531807941 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898648362102 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165182910266 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825168687147 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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