A society reflects the characteristics, cultures and values of the people living in it. These characteristics differ from society to society. I partially support the statement that by studying the major cities the most important
characteristics of a society can be understood. I also prefer that, the values and cultures can also be known and understood from the close look of the small towns and cities also.
Major cities are the live of a society. People of various kinds live there. They represents the small and big customs and cultures a society is made of. The characteristics of the society can be studied from the nature of people. It can also be determined from the behavior of the people towards themselves and to the outsiders. The most important
characteristics are examined from their lifestyle.
Since the major cities are the center of a society, their big and important events are celebrated grandly here. These events represent the thoughts and believe of the people, which helps one to understand the characteristics of that society.
Similarly, small towns and cities also hold the characteristics of a society. There may be some difference of the behavior and living styles among the people of small cities and big ones, but the characteristics of a society is the mixture of those dissimilarities.
One may say that, major cities are the cities of cosmopolitan culture,different people from different countries live in those cities. So therefore, it is difficult to understand the major characteristics of a particular society. In my defense I want to say that, the major cities may be the cities of cosmopolitan cultures and people but the base of the society remains the same. People who go to a different or new city, they have had to accept and adjust themselves in the new environment. They may behold their own culture, but they also participate in those culture and events where they live.
A society is established of both major and minor cities. Their combined characteristics reflect the characteristics of a society. One cannot truly judge a society by studying the major cities only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...lose look of the small towns and cities also. Major cities are the live of a soci...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'represent'
Suggestion: represent
...eople of various kinds live there. They represents the small and big customs and cultures ...
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Line 11, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , different
...s are the cities of cosmopolitan culture,different people from different countries live in...
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Line 11, column 135, Rule ID: SO_THEREFORE[1]
Message: Use simply 'So' or 'therefore'.
Suggestion: So; Therefore
...fferent countries live in those cities. So therefore, it is difficult to understand the majo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, similarly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11142857143 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18052877134 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.391428571429 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3853343323 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3181818182 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29472853781 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111517777218 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908764331953 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16558701851 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994453529314 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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