Dear Sir,
With great zeal, I am writing this letter as I come to know about the Robotics Seminar being conducted by your organization in Singapore in coming months. I am a Java developer with around 8 years of experience in Web and Android Technology, currently employed with an Information Technology firm in Noida, India.
I read about this seminar from current month's edition of TechBiz magazine. As I got mesmerized by the information provided in the advertisement, I was sure that I definitely did not want to miss it by any chance. I have been trying to learn about robotics on my own, but this seminar would definitely be a knowledge booster. I would request you to kindly share details of the seminar such as the date of occurrence, timings, Program schedule, Entry fee (If any) and in case accommodation is being provided for participants outside the country. Upon receiving this information, i will be able to plan for the seminar and would be able to apply for leave with my current organization accordingly.
It will be very kind of you if you could share the information as soon as possible.
Waiting for your reply.
Thanks,
Manpreet Walia
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85416666667 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89927852615 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3793233302 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7272727273 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239608784208 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767889797466 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752478772295 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114525899905 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749971646314 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.