The reading and the lecture are both about providing the employees the opportunity to choose between working for a typically five days a week or four day a week with 80 percent salary for the four day workers; which, is a crucial prospect with respect to the economy and the profit of the company. The author of the reading believes that the four day worker per week employee, always has the chance to use the extra time for developing his personal life. The lecturer costs a doubt on the claims made in the article. He thinks that the four days worker is more likely to lose their job, in addition to the negative effect of that on the profits of the company and the economy.
Firstly, the lecturer has expressed about his objection on the four day per week employee with respect to the following reasons: the option of working four days per week will cause hiring new staff with new offices and computers; which, will reduce the utility of the company. Moreover, the medical insurance for the employee will also increase the pressure. The Four day per week employee will lose the chance of having a stable job and developing his career.
Secondly, the reading passage author supports the mandatory policy that states on giving the opportunity for the employee to work for four day per week with 80 percent of the normal salary; which, will lower the rate of the unemployment by hiring one new employee corresponding to four employees working four days per week. Furthermore, the long weekend is helpful for more relaxing time that will decrease the percent of the errors that out from the employee under high pressure of work. The four day worker would use the the long holiday also in his personal relationships, like spend more time with his family and experiencing different things.
Finally, the four or five hour employee per week each one have its own pros and cons. For example, the four hour worker will have long holiday but less money and unstable work; while, the five hour employee will have more salary but small holiday, stressed life and more likely to have a stable job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 456, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... time for developing his personal life. The lecturer costs a doubt on the claims ma...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... giving the opportunity for the employee to work for four day per week with 80 pe...
^^
Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... of work. The four day worker would use the the long holiday also in his personal relat...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... of work. The four day worker would use the the long holiday also in his personal relat...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'employee' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'employees'.
Suggestion: employees
...ings. Finally, the four or five hour employee per week each one have its own pros and...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and more likely to have a stable job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1373.03311258 145% => OK
No of words: 366.0 270.72406181 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44808743169 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33583388107 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434426229508 0.540411800872 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.2184246798 49.2860985944 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.166666667 110.228320801 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 21.698381199 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06452816374 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463284780897 0.272083759551 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185060404984 0.0996497079465 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916194257939 0.0662205650399 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311007308568 0.162205337803 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779584810071 0.0443174109184 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.3589403974 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.2367328918 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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