Recently, there has been a stimulating news about millions of tons of food wastage all over the world in Tv and news media. What could be the cause of this problem? When so many people are starving with little or nothing to fall back on each day.
Meanwhile, the Federal and state Government spend allot on food production and more than one third of the food produce are wasted as a result of the way the food is been process and many of the food are destroy. This wasted food are put in the bin to prevent people from consuming them. Having in mind that so much have been spend on processing these food such as water, chemicals and electricity. However, some of the food destroy can be poisonous to human consumption as a result of too much chemical in use of processing the food hence it has to be destroy. The federal and state government should review the level of chemicals use in food production to prevent excessive food wastage, because many people in the world are dying in the world as a result of starvation.
Besides, shortage of skill workers such as chef has force so many employer to employ incompetent chef with little or no work experience. Thereby, introducing new recipes and producing more than the required number of meal order by customers, this incompetent chef forget that consumers may not be use to their newly introduce recipes thereby there is waste in food production. It is advice able that employers, employ workers that are competent with good working experience to prevent food wastage. kitchen chef serve consumers with meal and recipes they are use to.
In conclusion, the federal and state government should review the level of chemicals use in food processing and production to prevent food wastage in every country. Also, employers should try to employ competent chef in their kitchen and advice them to prevent quick introduction of latest recipes that will push customer away from enjoying their food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le or nothing to fall back on each day. Meanwhile, the Federal and state Govern...
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Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... fall back on each day. Meanwhile, the Federal and state Government spend a...
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Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'destroyed'.
Suggestion: destroyed
...s been process and many of the food are destroy. This wasted food are put in the bin to...
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Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
.... Having in mind that so much have been spend on processing these food such as water,...
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Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...t so much have been spend on processing these food such as water, chemicals and electricit...
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Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...er, chemicals and electricity. However, some of the food destroy can be poisonous to human ...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., shortage of skill workers such as chef has force so many employer to employ inc...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun employer seems to be countable; consider using: 'many employers'.
Suggestion: many employers
...kill workers such as chef has force so many employer to employ incompetent chef with little ...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...t chef forget that consumers may not be use to their newly introduce recipes thereb...
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kitchen
...ing experience to prevent food wastage. kitchen chef serve consumers with meal and reci...
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Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...onsumers with meal and recipes they are use to. In conclusion, the federal and...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with meal and recipes they are use to. In conclusion, the federal and state gov...
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Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...vice them to prevent quick introduction of latest recipes that will push customer away fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, may, so, third, while, as for, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80597014925 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5380402822 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4326317136 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186053945694 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729354602744 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566276295076 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120994095995 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689531201341 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.