Teacher’s salary should be based on their student’s academic performance.
A teacher is a person who delivers knowledge, fetch the talents in students and give a form to them. Students go to school to get good command on concept, learn new lessons, make mistakes etc. A teacher can provide a platform to all these things. Without school students can learn lessons but without a teacher any student cannot learn anything. A teacher may not be a educated scholar instead he/ she is a person with pool of knowledge. We all knew that our mother is our first teacher. Later on children are sent to schools where same grade of children are taught by the teacher. Such a teacher can be measured by knowledge but not with the results of the students.
One of the various reasons is every child has their own unique qualities in them. One may be good at studies, other may be good at sports. So a sports liking person may not get a better academic performance when compared to the studious one. By that reason we should not judge the teacher related to academics and vice-versa and should not reflect student’s performance in their salaries. If this kind of treatment is taking place there would be many consequences. Teacher in order to get good income may mislead students by providing important questions that may appear in exam so that when these students get good marks, teachers will get high salaries. Then the total meaning of learning is undertaken. Students will then grow only having good marks in their hands not knowledge or concept.
Another situation where this concept can be proved wrong is in the point of view of teachers. They come to school/ college to develop good educational values and improve their level of understanding. If teacher’s salaries are directly proportional to the student’s performance they will undergo pressure and burden. For some small kids even though adults sit beside them for hours to teach them, they will not grasp so easily. If this phenomenon is applied then the teacher will be worried about that particular student's performance. Even teachers need time for themselves and their families.
One way to maintain this situation is to provide incentives to the teachers who resulted their student’s performance better than last time. However it is all depending upon the circumstances like type of students, mentality of teacher, other surrounding factors. At a glimpse if one would suggest that teacher's salary must be depending on their student’s performance many negatives will overtake the positives of the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03349282297 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80549699646 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528708133971 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4488025186 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.16 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.72 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388740424625 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104199419737 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983260155212 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244357492046 0.150359130593 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484759161121 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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