You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to manager- explain why you want a take time off work
- give details of the amount of time you need.
-suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.
Dear John,
I am writing this letter in regards to getting holidays from work for two months.
First of all, I have been working as a Legal Assistant in your organization since 2014. I have planned to take admission in the Taxation course at the York University. So, I need a break of two months for the aforesaid purpose which would be beneficial for getting more attainment about some complicated taxation matters. Thus, it enhances my work accuracy and similarly, it puts the positive impression on the work of your company as well in a foreseeable future.
In addition, I want to you know that I have completed balance sheets and Profit & Loss Accounts of some clients. However, the remaining work would be done by my colleague Mr. Smith who have the experience to complete such sort of work. Therefore, I hope that the work will not be affected during my holidays.
I am eagerly waiting for your reply.
Yours Truly,
Harrie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear John, I am writing this letter in regards to getting holidays from work for two mont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, sort of, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84567901235 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66551532725 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679012345679 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5439267955 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 4.34317383033 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298168138115 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10189687898 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031975581156 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151078093838 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518386087104 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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