You have recently gone to live in a new city.
Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:
• Explain why you have gone to live in the new city
• Describe the place where you are living
• Invite your friend to come and see you
Dear Anne,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to you to explain why I have moved out to another city. Please allow me to elaborate on my situation.
As you know, I have been working as a Legal Assistant at Mann Associates which is located in Toronto. Also, my previous town was almost 50 miles away from my workplace. Thus, I have moved to Toronto with all family members. Moreover, there are many things to explore such as outdoor and recreational activities and a lot of eateries. Inclusively, it has famous for multicultural diversity and it provides an opportunity to know about different traditions and languages indeed. Nevertheless, the public transport is well established from every nook and corner in such city.
What is more, we have planned to celebrate the birthday of my spouse on the last Saturday of this month. So, I would be greatly appreciated if you could come to visit at my place.
Hoping to see you soon,
Harrie
- Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. they have just sent you some photos of your holiday.write a letter to your friends . say thank them for the photos and for the holidayexplain why you did not write earlier and invit 81
- In many countries today the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from these of previous generations Some people say this has had a negative effect on the health Do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- Some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared to an apartment 89
- Nowadays children s writing and mathematical abilities are affected by computers and calculators Some people argue that we should limit the usage of these tools in schools Do you agree or disagree 88
- Excessive traffic has made cities unpleasant places to live and work in. For this reason, private cars should be completely banned from city centres. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my place. Hoping to see you soon, Harrie
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, such as, you know, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79166666667 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76994289053 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.720238095238 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1164406928 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198261183434 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717920414219 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736745184043 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147725021702 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629482377876 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.