You have recently gone to live in a new city.
Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:
• Explain why you have gone to live in the new city
• Describe the place where you are living
• Invite your friend to come and see you
Dear Prabhjot
I am doing well here and hope the same for you. You would be glad to know that I had moved to Noida recently and I am writing this letter to invite you over my new flat on the house warming party on 23rd November.
Off lately, I had joined USG Boral Pvt. Ltd. and my office is in sector 123, Noida. Initially, my working area was Gurgaon but after my promotion, company's management has asked me to join in main office. Hence, I shifted to Noida. I have rented an apartment in Lotus Boulevard society which is one of the best societies in the area. You will love to know that there are squash courts available in the club house which I had started to play. Regarding my flat, It is two bedroom flat which 2 bathrooms. Since it is on 12th floor, the air quality is good.
I am throwing a party on 23rd November and I would like to invite you to join us and we would play squash over the weekend. Please reply me with the positive news that you will definitely me on the given date.
Regards
Abhishek Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Prabhjot I am doing well here and hope the same f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27040816327 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1978073489 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8375273914 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3846153846 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14871131187 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418483487079 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577344647379 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118342411625 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709544268075 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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