Most of the schools are planning to replace sports and exercise classes with more academic sessions. What is your opinion on this change? How is this change will affect children’s life in your view?
With the inception of globalisation in the modern world, survival of individual has become tough and everyone are focused on their jobs so that they can keep their pace with the organisation. In order to prepare for this fight many school of business advocate that time slot for games and exercises must be given to resourceful subjects such as computers or science. I believe that this is foot in mouth move and must be abandoned before it effect the child life negatively.
Undoubtedly, games and sports are very much necessary for building the character of adolescents. One can learn the qualities like team working, leadership etcetera for the games only. Apart from that, there is very good future in the field of games and athletes can earn plethora of money from such games. For an illustration, Virat Kohli is an Indian cricketer who represents team as captain, is in the list of Forbes 100 richest individuals.
Aforementioned notions clearly depicts the necessity of sports in the life of children. Banning children from playing games will lead them into human without backbones. They will not be able to take decisions in their lives and will lack proportionally. Even the less, games are seen as stress reducer and they are very useful when their is plenty of pressure on kids about their education. Hence, not allowing them to play will might put them into depression and our whole world will doom.
Having dwelled on thoughts, it is clear that sports play an important role in juveniles life and they should be allowed to play and must be encourage to take part into sports events.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun school seems to be countable; consider using: 'many schools'.
Suggestion: many schools
...ion. In order to prepare for this fight many school of business advocate that time slot for...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...s reducer and they are very useful when their is plenty of pressure on kids about the...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
...e allowed to play and must be encourage to take part into sports events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, well, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90073529412 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62160711279 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8694424907 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.538461538 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111076498961 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414729918581 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337880402441 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647103135648 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373983622993 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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