Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
With the inception of visualisation, human life has become more entertaining. This visualisation in the form of advertisements is the new strategy adopted by the organisations to sell their products. In order to make their product more tempting, companies put huge amount of their revenue in the campaigns. In the same context, group of people feel that such promotions exploit human psychology and encourages to buy the products which are not meant for them, while another group say that the it educate us which help us in buying appropriate products. I am in the support of former notion as I believe that many of the advertisements on electronic media are not useful.
Admittedly, people buy the new product on the basis of the promotional video on the television and company exploit this.Even the less, many of the information provided on such platforms are fake For an instance, We had seen a lot of Aurvedic products on mobiles and billboards, but actually, they all use chemicals and are harmful for our health. Products launched by Mr Ramdev are silent example of this.
Further more, companies hire celebrities whom they use in their advertisements so that the desired population can be targeted. To substantiate it, Fair and Lovely hire Mr Shah rukh khan as their brand ambassador so that male adolescents can be targeted while on the other hand, same company hire Miss Yami Gautam to target female audience. This make their products more tempting and youth goes to market to purchase them. Apart from that, all the products are tested in labs but the actual results are not shown in such videos.
Having dwelled on such thoughts, it is clear that the advertisements make us to purchase the products which are of no use or may harm us and everyone should do research before buying any products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
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Message: Did you mean 'educates'?
Suggestion: educates
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion provided on such platforms are fake For an instance, We had seen a lot of Au...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, so, well, while, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92810457516 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84812874139 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0392137589 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225365224547 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715230223939 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735731487115 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145970374664 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757976972109 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.