Dear Sam,
My name is John James, I am a member of your insurance company for a long time. Recently I travel to London for a Microsoft project design in relation to my job.
I travel from oxford street to King's road using the train, during my trip I remember using my laptop Samsung 11.6'' notebook white in color, a 2016 modern.
l kept the laptop under my seat, to be pick up when I arrival my final designation.But I could not find the laptop in my laptop bag when I arrived at home neither could I remember the carriage number of the train I enter in other to look for the laptop.
I went back to the train station to inquired about my missing laptop, but all effort prove abortive without success. I would appreciate if my missing laptop could be replace as soon as possible to enable me get back to work. It will be difficult for me to work and concentrate without my laptop because each day I stay away from my laptop I loss five thousand pounds.
Please Mr Sam, I will appreciate if your insurance company can treat this matter urgently so that I can get back to work as soon as possible.
Best regards
John James.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: white
...r using my laptop Samsung 11.6 notebook white in color, a 2016 modern for some online software...
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Line 4, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: L
... online software design in the train. l slept off in the train after I finish w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3179916318 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30509379363 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.622605031667 94% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1329376247 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0342976117718 0.216113520407 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.018011944782 0.0766984524023 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280794475822 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0330295499008 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370829497725 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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