Researchers have shown that average life of the human being has been increased dramatically from last few years. This increase in life expectancy is obviously due to the modern equipment used in the medical industry. Of course, everyone wants to live longer to enjoy life and so, this advancement is considered as positive by most of the people on the earth. However, this drift has caused some adverse effects on the individuals as well as society.
Throughout the history, it has been seen that immortality has been considered as the blessing from the God. Everyone wants some more years with their loved ones. Due to this greed of longer life, most of the people on the earth consider advancement in the medical science positive. Apart from this, at the social level, people feel that more aged ones would benefit the organization or the government with their knowledge and experience. For example, senior employees would guide the juniors under them to work better.
Nevertheless, an increase in the aged population has adversely impacted the community as well as the individual. Firstly, owing to large aged population, the government has to do more expenditure on medical care and pension of the senior citizen. This will increase the burden on the young taxpayers and regime. Secondly, elder does not have the as much productivity as the younger have. To fill this gap in the productivity, youth will have to work hard for the development of the country. Lastly, an increase in the population also causes the detrimental effects on the environment as well. For instance, increased population can create issues like deforestation, drought and heavy rain.
To sum up, individually, a majority of people on the planet would consider modern technology in medical as a blessing for the human race as it gives more years to live. But at the same time, it has negative impacts on individual, society and environment as a whole.
- Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work To what extent do you agree 77
- Some people think that the only way to have success in business is to have a unique product What factors do you think influence the success of a company 82
- Politicians are more responsible for protection of the environment than individuals To what extent do you agree or disagree 39
- Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family What are the advantages and disadvantages of a family run business 87
- Some people think that it is better for a country s economy for people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money Discuss both sides and give your opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, of course, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03426791277 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81462407351 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529595015576 0.561755894193 94% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0181403459 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7777777778 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299848701668 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844563978696 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526967953492 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164773975752 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624073463948 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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