Do you agree or disagree with this statement that science made our life easy and comfortable?
Science is one of the fundamental subject in our study and basically it is the guidance for a successful life. Some people will agree with the statement that says science made our life easy and comfortable, and some may disagree. But according to my prospective science is definitely made our life easy and comfortable for two reasons.
First of all, learning science is essential and it is the base for every invention in the world. For example, the famous scientist Thomas Addison who invented the light and the first lamb. He spent most of his life learning science therefore,he used laws and equations of science as a result he figured out how to create the lamb .However, science is not an easy subject to learn but it is really interesting and significant. On the other hand, there is a great motivation while studying science since, it result on new inventions which lead eventually to a huge revolution in our world.
Second, I believe that science facilitates our life and makes it comfortable in many ways. Actually, without the use of science we could not reach to this marvelous life. As i think every technology based on science for instance, the revolution on treating rare or difficult diseases such as cancer all are based on science knowledge and how to cure every disease. Drugs manufacturing is also based on knowledge of the chemical reactions and interactions. Furthermore, in every aspect and technology we will find science side by side which influence our life and made it simple and convenient .
In conclusion, science helps us to live our life in an easy way specially nowadays with the race of innovations and technology evolutions that definitely based on science knowledge and well understanding.Although learning science is quite difficult but it is really interesting and inspiring our motivation and success . SO, i suggest that every person should concentrate while learning science.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05993690852 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00730399534 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514195583596 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9518512009 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.571428571 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7857142857 5.45110844103 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356370096855 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131499668648 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108328465746 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238324595681 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115516774866 0.0645574589148 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.