Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risk or chance. This trend has disadvantages. Do you believe that advantages outweigh disadvatanges? Give reasons for your answer and examples
People differ in personalities from one to another. Some prefer following secure pathways in life ,others believe that ceasing opportunities even if they carry an ambiguous outcome is the ultimate pathway to success. Despite many advantages of taking risks in life, I believe that the outcome is predominantly disadvantageous because of the high chances of enormous damage and loss of confidence in adventurous personalities.
For one, although taking chances may lead to sudden wealth if the person is lucky, it may also lead to bankruptcy. For instance, investing a large proportion of money in stock market may cause loss of fortunes once prices suddenly plunge. Such equity capital if were invested in a well planned project with well calculated outcomes, would have doubled or even tripled. This example demonstrates the importance of planning ahead rather than taking chances.
In addition,adventurous behavior may lead to non reliability. For example, doctors who do not follow safe practice by taking risks trying unfamiliar management plans with no evidence based outcomes may expose themselves to medico-legal consequences that may lead to suspense from practicing medicine or sabotage their medical reputation. These risks are minimized by following practice guidelines that have well known outcomes.
To conclude, in spite of some benefits of making risks, the drawbacks significantly outweighs them due to the reasons mentioned above. I strongly urge people to think well and think ahead meticulously before embarking into a new project or making serious decisions as this trend is safer with reliable outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66265060241 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09566402503 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670682730924 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7001598233 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211701364301 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066949882613 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460199894592 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115742801472 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583173300677 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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