The supplied two pie charts represent how much money was received for childrens^ charity and its outlay in USA during one year.
Overall, donated food shared as the biggest proportion among in revenue sources as the program services which accounted for a significant amount of expenditure.
In detail, the total Received amount was a slight higher than the amount of expenditure $53/561,580 and $53,224,896 respectively. With regards to Revenue sources , Donated food comprised of over the half of total charity by 86.6% , while Community contributions was the second place with 10.4 %. By following it, the program revenue shared 2.2 %, while both Investment income and Government grants together accounted for 0.4 % as the same as other kinds of income.
According to outlay,the program service was the largest proportion to 95.8% , whereas, the expenditure of fundraising category was 2.6 %.and Management and General,in contrast, shared the lowest expenditure by 1.6%.
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. 73
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 93
- Some people believe the benefits of tourism outweigh the problems it creates in particular place. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- The graph below shows the percentage sales of trainers made by a sportwear company in one year. The Flying Boots trainers were lunched at the beginning of that year. 56
- The pie graphs below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.pie comparison 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54054054054 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90157307821 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655405405405 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5028128394 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 54.0 1.69756097561 3181% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117564724661 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653201686922 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926522158109 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853947407018 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104464973588 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.