Dear Eric,
Thanks for your favor of attend my house and pet during my vacation in Australia. I am grateful for your kindness.
Regarding my puppy Hood, three meals is advised to feed it every day, which is breakfast at 8 AM, lunch at 12 PM and supper at 6 PM. You can find the dog food in pantry. Please give a cup of food for each meal and you can find the whit cup in the bag of the dog food. Besides, please make sure the bowl always has water in it. Lastly, Hood is an energitic dog so you should walk it out after supper every day.
Concerning my house, the only thing you need to do is to push the green dustbin to the curb of the road every Monday evening and push the black dustbin out every the other Monday morning. Truck will recycle the waste on Tuesday morning and you can take them back afterward.
If you encounter any question, please feel free to call me. My phone number is 420???420f. Or you can alternatively send me a e-mail. My e-mail address is abc@gmail.com.
Yours sincerely
Jim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, lastly, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28635748639 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7402936686 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5714285714 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185189715747 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689324255364 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070002530259 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109001061495 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887794053938 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.09 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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