It is true that in the current scenario more private firms come forward to spend money for research. Some people have an opinion that it brings more benefits for mankind, while, others oppose it and say the disadvantages are more. This essay discusses advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.
The people who support the benefits of research by private organization put forward some relevant points to make their stand clear. First and foremost, multi- national companies are rich enough to invest in research programs. In the past, all the researches were funded by governments. However, these researches were funded poorly as the governments have so many other important responsibilities towards the public such as education and health care sector. Many researches run currently, which need a bulk amount of money to complete, only can be funded by private firms. For example, research to invent an effective medicine for the dangerous disease AIDS is now funded by private drug companies. If government spend money in the drug for AIDS, they may not fulfill their promise to the public in other areas. Another important point is the attractive salary package offered to scientists by big companies, which attract a lot of talented youngsters to this profession. Before youngsters were not interested in become a scientist as the salary package by governments very less.
The people who talk about the disadvantages counter the above arguments with some genuine reasons. Firstly, research results are not safe with private companies. Many companies used these results for profit gaining instead of using it for mankind well- being. For instance, private firms stop other companies or government to produce new drugs so that they can earn huge profit from their invention.Secondly, they will alter some results in favor of them. For instance, research about cosmetic products by companies are almost all fake. However, a government cannot control these companies and prove their finding is wrong because of huge expenditure in these reseaches.
To conclude, I feel the disadvantages are more comparing to advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36011904762 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86549962154 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550595238095 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0208465342 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7894736842 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173892751016 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604300566338 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553084646222 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140181365577 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706185727992 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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