Dear Eric,
You may not believe it that I just moved to Brisbane two days ago. As you know, the atmosphere is severely polluted in China; therefore, I deciede to live abroad to escape from the smog. Fortunately, all my work paid off and my visa was granted last month.
The house I am living in is a townhouse on Hellawell Road. It is quite and away from road. The house has three bedroom on the second floor and I have a huge living room on ground floor. Additionally, the most amazing aspect about the house is that a gaint swimming pool lies in the yard. The swimming pool is not an ordinary one in most families; however, it is 4 meters wide and 6 meters long, which is twice large than an ordinary one.
I would like to invite you to visit my house. We can swim in that big swimming pool and enjoy beer and barbque. I am looking forward to your reply and visit.
Yours
Jim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Eric, You may not believe it that I just moved...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, may, second, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2899408284 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2506063202 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639053254438 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3945740271 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9090909091 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133448367051 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477389967112 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505339547088 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848522854666 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331281962859 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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