Over the last few years, telling the truth in different relationships has been at the center of global debate. Some people are of the belief that telling the truth is the most important element in any relationship, while some others contradict with this view for some reasons. I am of the opinion that telling the truth in any situation at a relationship is not necessary.
One important reason behind this issue is that sometimes telling the truth may people. for instance, when one of your friends buy a new dress and think that it is the beautiful one, and request your opinion happily, you cannot tell the truth that it is not beautiful because with this truth she becomes disturbed and even can distract your relationship. Additionally, everyone around us has a defect, however, we are not exceptional from these faults too, so it is not a great idea that we tell the truth about that defect to persons directly, it can be harmful to our relationships and may cause people become nervous and anxious about it. As an illustration of this, consider the following example. I had a close friend several years ago she was a bit dirty and untidy, one day I said her that she is very messy without any attention her spirit, she got absolutely angry and furious. After that, she never talked to me and I lost one of my best friends because of telling the truth. Although she had a bad behavior and was untidy, I should not say her fault directly and it was not necessary, to tell the truth to her. Consequently, telling the truth is important, but not always.
Moreover, I do believe that in some situation telling the truth can cause some drawbacks and detriments. For example, in the business world, companies and producers cannot tell the truth about their products to customers because they certainly lose their clients. In the business world advertisers have to disguise some truths to attract more people otherwise, not only they cannot sell their products but also they lose their market. We always hear and see many advertisements on TV, radio or billboards in the city that all of them claim their products are the best one. As a result, telling the truth can cause some producers lose their money.
Essentially, although it is not a good way, to tell the truth, sometimes it is better to tell white lies for conserving our relationships. From my vantage point, for some reason mentioned above, telling the truth would not be the most important consideration in any relationships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...sometimes telling the truth may people. for instance, when one of your friends buy ...
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Line 3, column 783, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...e was a bit dirty and untidy, one day I said her that she is very messy without any ...
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Line 3, column 1047, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[1]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'tell'?
Suggestion: tell
...d behavior and was untidy, I should not say her fault directly and it was not neces...
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Line 3, column 1176, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...telling the truth is important, but not always. Moreover, I do believe that in some...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79166666667 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69301221958 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0309575361 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223822061863 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830717438049 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521960145024 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148160701308 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466811768079 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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