What is the solutions to obesity
The problem with people today is that most of them are becoming obese. Nowadays obesity has become a big issue that the world facing. People can have a choice both workout and eating healthy food or stay as they be. Eating diet, workout, media and with the government help will lead people to live longer
As you can see now people intake too much calorie per week, mostly young people. Fast and junk food is not bad, but it make people overweight , so to solve this, Young people should eat 2 meal of fast food in 1 month. As for Adult, they should eat 1 meal of fast food in a month. Besides that, a healthy diet can help people to live longer. A healthy meal include 33% veggie, 33% carbohydrate such as rice and bread 15% dairy product like milk and, butter, and 12% of protein like meat and fish. Also that some fish and oil give us a lot of vitamin and nutrition too. To know what good for body, you should check the nutrition of the food by internet or it is a food can you can check in behind of the can. When cooking food, know how much oil and how much fat put in a best way to healthy for self and everybody.
Secondly, people have eat healthy meal, or diet meal, but they don’t work out or excise, so eating healthy meal cannot be absorb or digest effectively. Not just only eating help people to live longer or not being obese, people have to be active all the time. What mean active? It just simply mean that play sport or do gym at club. Running can help too, people usually run before eating and walking after eating to help people digest easily. People who work in office, have to sit desk all day can be an issues, not going or moving can storage a lot of fat, to fix this , people should go out to and walk for 3 to 5 min then come back to work. People who watching TV a lot at home can buy a neck phone holder to hold they phone and go jogging or running, and the best part is they still can watching news, TV show. To sum up people should workout at least 2 per days.
Government can help to prevent people become obese. Governments could also implement initiatives to improve their citizens' eating and exercise habits. This could be done through education, for example by adding classes to the curriculum about healthy diet and lifestyles. Governments could also do more to encourage their citizens to walk or cycle instead of taking the car, for instance by building more cycle lanes or increasing vehicle taxes. While some might argue that increased taxes are a negative way to solve the problem, it is no different from the high taxes imposed on cigarettes to reduce cigarette consumption. Fast food store can be ban from near school and playground, government can make a law to move all fast food store away from that.
As TV is one of the most entertaining things of people, media can be a useful way to help people aware of obese. Media has a lot of advertisement, what if media make a TV show about healthy cooking or how to buy healthy grocery. Beside that media can provide image or video about how obese can make people slow working, get high rate of heart attack and cancer, so that people can aware of it.
In conclude, people should aware for them self about health, being obese are not good, it can cause a lot of medical health problems and help them self to prevent obese. Government and citizens should collaboration with each other to make both life healthier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, as for, at least, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 32.0 9.8082437276 326% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 36.0 13.8261648746 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2799.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 635.0 407.700716846 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40787401575 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01988110783 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20838671277 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 299.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470866141732 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 853.2 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2920594697 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0460048879264 0.236089414692 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0192181513681 0.076458572812 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451523970605 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0341118909733 0.150856017488 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024025841689 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6.0
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