Have you ever considered human lives without the capital punishment? In absence of the death penalty, our lives are more vulnerable and the crimes of violence simply soar. So the capital punishment is necessary to curb heinous crimes in the society. I completely agree with this idea. In this essay, I will support my opinion with relevant examples.
This can be explained by the fact that this type of punishment is arguably the greatest deterrent to criminals and potential criminals. That is to say, criminals would be readily deterred if they knew that the punishment would be death. Undoubtedly, human beings naturally fear to die. Not only it prevents them from engaging in criminal activities but also it generates tremendous horror in them. Take hanging for illustration. In Saudi Arabia, hardcore criminals are hanged in public. So people witness live unnecessary prolonged suffocations and sufferings of convicted criminals. Every one would agree that criminals would think twice before commiting crimes, knowing that he would be punished by death. Therefore, there can be no doubt that this type of execution discourages potential offenders.
A further reason is that barbaric crimes such as murders, rapes, drugs trafficking and so on can be reduced drastically. Which is why, some countries are actively carrying out the death penalty. Take China for an instance, where marketing, carrying and using illegal drugs are punishable by death. As a result, the rate of illegal drug dealings have plunged markedly over the last few years. So you see how the death penalty can limit effectively the evil acts?
To conclude, we can say beyond any doubt that the death penalty is worthwhile in overcoming monstrous crimes and creating a safe and peaceful society.
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Dear sir, please comment on
Dear sir, please comment on my weaknesses. I will correct it. Thank you.
the lower marks because of
the lower marks because of the Sentence length which is too short:
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69%
and it caused the automated_readability_index low too:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
read the essay again, you will find out the sentences are too short.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, no doubt, such as, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2350877193 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76594957833 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6178351568 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268405887181 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076489200125 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755797689576 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174953750228 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147452350043 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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