Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, newspapers, television and radio programs are overrun by crimes. Indeed, people are hesitant to go out of their homes. A growing number of people believe that death penalty is necessary to curb a surge in crimes of violence. It is their view that people are stressed and anxious in absence of capital punishment. I completely agree with this idea. In this essay, i will support my opinion with relevant examples.

Undeniably, capital punishment is true deterrent to any criminals. Take hanging for an instance. In Saudi Arabia, hardcore criminals are hanged in public. People witness frequent unnecessary sufferings of criminals during the procedure. As a consequence, it creates a terrible intimidation among criminals. Therefore, the offenders will think thrice before they commit crimes.

In addition, people feel complete secure. Not only it generates a sense of relief but also it guarantees zero possibilities of escaping from the prison and re-offending. As a result, people feel comfortable and easy to go to work and walk even at late night.

Nevertheless, this type of punishment is often regarded as inhumane and ineffective. It demonstrates lack of respect for human beings. Moreover, it has never had a positive impact in society and has killed many people who have later been proved to be an innocent. Also, crime rate has soared significantly.

In a nutshell, although it is a common belief that death penalty is ruthless and unkind punishment, i believe it is worthwhile punishment as it discourages any type of criminals and of course, execution brings a peace in the society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in addition, of course, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23938223938 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02998535608 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629343629344 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 44.3215523194 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.85 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.95 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116004245628 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297021438837 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465412181345 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598394171126 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370475875327 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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