Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injures these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
Dolphin is known as one of the most intelligent animals; hence, they are trained for entertainment in the circus. This leads to many objections because people aware that these animals can be injured. I totally agree with this idea.
As can be seen, dolphin is a common way to amuse people, especially children in the circus. It means that they have been interned since they were small or was born even to train instead of living in oceans freely. These animals have to stand savage training program for a long time. This is the main reason cause the decrease in fertility, health and age of dolphins. Besides, in narrow pools, the water environment is polluted where bad bacteria and virus can maintain makes dolphins infect intestinal and venereal diseases.
Secondly, the dolphin is in danger of extinction. According to a research of Dolphins-world, the most considerable threat to dolphin’s death come from human’ demands. It also point out that 95% deaths of dolphins during the 10-years recently was caused by human. There is a growing body of evidence that people harm them by many ways such as uncareful captivity, illegal transport and capture…
In conclusion, for all intents and purposes given below, using dolphins to perform in the circus is a bastadry that needs a lot of social denunciations and government’s solutions and laws to cancel completely this action.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12663755459 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88478768055 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663755458515 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.8331615118 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224132208134 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737713133874 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496121366656 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13205859313 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682827732336 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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