Some people work for the same organisation all their working life.
Others think it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both
these views and give your own opinion
In our contemporary, different individuals have had plenty of career
options. It is true that working environment is very important for people
to improve their skill or get promotions and achieve the top of their
career. While it can be argued that some people prefer working for the
similar company their whole life, I strongly believe that changing job is
a good way to develop themselves
There are several reasons why some people want to work for the same
company all their working life. Firstly, if they work for an identical
company for a long time, they can understand the company thoroughly
and be familiar with the staff and the process of operation. By devoting
most of their life to the valuable results of work, they can have good
promotion prospects and develop their career in the workplace. Another
benefit of staying at the same community for a long time is that it allows
for the creation of strong and long-lasting work relationships. Strong
work relationships in a certain industry can be vital to success in
managing business.
On the other hand, I believe that switching jobs is a great way to
discover yourself and gain a wealth of experience of yourife. If you
work for only one organization during all your life time, it becomes
boring and monotonous and could not have the spirit of challenge and
innovative ability. Besides, changing work brings new beginnings and
excitement to life. This gives you a chance to adapt easily to new
situations, new environments, and new people. As a result of those
challenges, when you are required to do a variety of tasks in different
businesses, which leads to the growth of their skills and experience.
In conclusion, it seems to me that people should work for different
organizations despite the undeniable benefits of their loyalty to a sole
company
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 48, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...r only one organization during all your life time, it becomes boring and monotonous and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06472491909 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81053381844 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550161812298 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0166465465 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411874228807 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141706917502 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103701456762 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108813513248 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113125084683 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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