Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
"Famous entertainers are the inevitable part of every society" said Bernard Russell, one of brilliant mind through the history. There is no doubt that opinion of celebrities is one of controversial issues in every modern society, affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question, however, is that whether to agree or disagree has sparked spirited debate among people recently. I am, to a huge extent, agree with this standpoint. In the ensuing paragraph, I will try to shed some lights on my perspective through ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
The exquisite point to be mentioned here is that it is crystal clear that most of the young children really interest in celebrities also choose them as symbols of beauty or strength, follow them easily. They are not mature due to they cannot distinguish between right and wrong accurately, they prefer to act like their favorite celebrities even their style is not logical and preferable. For instance, when I was high school most of the teenagers try to follow Miley Cyrus also imitate everything from here, even style of her speaking, by this advance some bad behavior spread at a faster rate among young people and inspired them easily.
Another point to be mentioned here is that teenagers have more leisure time to spend on magazines or news about artists and celebrities. As a clarification, children can access to some voice and news which affected on their beliefs and alter them. AS an example, if one famous celebrity says that she do not eat rice because it is making me fat, all young people avoid to use rice without thinking about that how much rice important for us and consist of various types of vitamin, thus it can cause harm to the teenagers who need to eat rice for growing.
Although the aforementioned points are the first reasons cross the mind at the first glance, but they are no mean that the only ones. Actually there is another subtle point which must be born in mind. It should be noted that older people have lots of tasks to do during the day so that earn money to provide good condition and make a bright future, therefore if they find free time they spend on some important news about politics, economic or president presentation instead of waste their time on some useless data which fraud people. As an example, my father really busy thanks to his work, therefore he always searches about some new which has a reliable source like: BBC and VOA.
To make a long story short, from all the above mentioned points and reasons, one we can safety draw a conclusion that if one weight merits and demerits of above arguments soon we can realize that famous entertainers can be more influential on young people who cannot judge between true and false. That is why I agree with this statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...s and alter them. AS an example, if one famous celebrity says that she do not eat rice because i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2342.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84886128364 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58720981977 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554865424431 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4028921011 48.9658058833 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.764705882 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4117647059 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169389080259 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050994686756 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040332894839 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850081631687 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183121997928 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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