Some people believe that to learn the way other cultures live it is better to watch films or video programs. Others believe that it is better to read books and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements? Give your own opinion and examples.
Learning to host country culture has been in the headlines for decades. Some feel that it is easy by reading journals and newspaper. However; I agree with those who say that its better to learn through flicks. In this essay, I will examine both side and give my opinion.
As for those who believe that learning a culture lives of other country through flicks and video program is not a good, they believe in this way because if we look at the recent victory of Trump's in USA, on a local video channel we can't get any of his policies effects however if we get this through newspaper we found it's policies are going to raise the living standard. According to a recent study by JP Morgan reveals that reducing tax will bring down prices and people have more money power in their hands.
In contrast, other people who hold the notion that to learn other culture lives through flicks and video programs. This is because by looking at the movies or their local TV shows we got an idea about their culture, their feelings. According to a study by University of Oregon which revealed that those who try to learn through videos are quick in learning. The same study reveals that if people learn in this way it is easy for both countries citizens to work together.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the notion that if we try learn to host country culture through flicks and videos that improves our abilities at better pace. In future, we will certainly see the change is on the horizon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, as for, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57089552239 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23849189339 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518656716418 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9393407074 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.083333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222637022316 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833406976617 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748328117334 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142087166536 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157960355082 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.