TPO-5 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
This is one of the controversial issues among people because the result of that determines peoples’ comfortably in comparison with the past. I completrly disagree with this claim that today people spend most of their time for doing their favorite activities. Here you can see my reasos.
First, doing an enjoyment activities can waste people’ time. Nowadays, by emerging the economic crisis around the world, finding job becomes one of the people’s difficulties. Because of that, people spend most of their time for learning useful skills to improve their chance for finding a suitable job. Also, they prefer to do some extra job to earn more moneyfor managing their lives and gain new experiences instead of doing some unbeneficial enjoyement activities. For example, most of the students working in some liberary, resturant, and company for become ready for their future job alongside with studying.
Second. Preventing from learning is another noticeable reason. Todays, people face with the huge advancement and improvement in different field of sciences and technology. This developemnets change people’ attitude about the style of living. Now, education becomes one of the people’s most important prefernace. They spend a lot of time for passing several classes or connect with other people around the world to expand their knowledge and information. However, in the past education was not an important factor among people, and people prefered to spend their time for having pleasure time and doing their personal activities.
On the other hand, some people assret that nowadays people spend a lot of time for their amusing personal activities. Mostly, the new technology assits people live more comfortable since they have more free time. For example, the internet helps people to buy their favorite things in a minimum of time. So, they have more time to have an enjoyment time. Howevr, I still declare that todays’ people spend most of their time for doing their duty. Although new technology eleminate most of the people’s difficulies, it bring a lot of extra duty for people. For example, most of the mosther enroll their children in several classes such as sport, music, English and France language which take both mother and children time. So, most of the time they even do not have a time to see their friends.
In conclusion, now people’ difficulties completely change their style of living. So, they spend their time for resolving them like studying hard to improve ther situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 526, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...st of the people's difficulies, it bring a lot of extra duty for people. For exa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29702970297 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76919471484 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49504950495 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0944549771 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245992702308 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895317348669 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771583785337 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165929277887 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412895974333 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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