“truth is important and vital for continue life” said Bertrand Russell one of brilliant mind through the history. There is no doubt that truth is one of the hectic phenomena in every modern society. affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question is that, However, whether important in life and relationship or not important has sparked a spirited debate among people recently. I am, a huge extent , agree in favor of the former standpoint. In the ensuring paragraph, I will try to shed some lights on my perspective through some ample examples and conspicuous reasons.
on the one hand, it is crystal clear that if one person say truth and never say lie so he/she can improve situation and withstand in his/her life significant firmly I will say truth helped people stay and remain in important situation for example in the job if employee say lie this has negative effect in his job and his manger.( lie can change mind's people) truth can make person successful.
on the other hand, There is no doubt truth help people find good and kind husband so if one person try to be loyal and never say lie husband try to built better life with conformation and relax. for example my husband always say truth about work and his day so I always try for my relationship with my husband.
finally, nobody can deny that children learn all thing from his/her parents. when parents say truth. it is effective for their children. it is massage for children. for instance, when one person call to my house If i was very busy but I never say to my children tell to his lie it helps me due to my children never say lie to me. do you thing is it true way for train?
to make long story short, from all the above mentioned reasons and points, one can safety draw a conclusion that if one weight merits and demerits of above statements, we can soon realize that truth is important in relationship
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, for example, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41152263374 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3232266001 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.4054419156 48.9658058833 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904628155672 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392548061317 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345571544922 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611778398853 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199346096935 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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