You are planning to stay with a friend in an English speaking country. You are writing to your friend to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following questions:
• How long should you plan to stay for
• What you should bring with you
• What you would like to do there
Hi Ben,
I hope things are going great at your end. I am planning a trip to Sydney Australia and I plan to stay at your house in one month’s time and there is number of information I am seeking for which I would be grateful if you can find them before my arrival. This will allow me to plan my schedule well in advance and thereby giving me the ample amount of time during my short tenure.
Firstly, our summer vacation has just started and it would be lasting for about 8 weeks starting from 21/02/2017 to 14/04/2017. I know we have been talking about this plan, but there might be chances of school extending the holidays by 2-3 weeks more. If there is going to be any further changes, I am certainly going to re-inform you about the schedule.
Secondly, what recommendation would you like to make? For instance, what types of clothes, shoes and other necessary stuffs do I need to carrying to make my journey smooth and comfortable. Do I Really need a rain coat and an umbrella as well along with clothes and accessories?
Thirdly, I intend to find out about the various varieties of course are available in Sydney on Information technology. Basically, that would only help me to form an unbiased opinion on the authenticity of the courses being offered at different universities and how likely are the chances of getting a scholarship in that course.
Many Thanks
Faizal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'need to carry'?
Suggestion: need to carry
..., shoes and other necessary stuffs do I need to carrying to make my journey smooth and comfortab...
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Line 7, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ell along with clothes and accessories? Thirdly, I intend to find out about the ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for instance, of course, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68699186992 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69863901284 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.360824742268 554% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9038733502 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0833333333 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 4.34317383033 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136927948979 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046331468621 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437153895975 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752033704013 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341462370661 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.