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Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
The essential aspect which drove people to achieve their goal is happiness. Many students study hard day and night in purpose to fulfill high score and achieve their visions. While some workers give their best in working to get promotion or bonus in every intention to reach their goals as well. It is the way which they believe will bring them to happy life in the future.
However, Psychologist claim that factors to be happy is coming from family, friends, society and own personality. The expert report as the result of their research, sixty per cent of happy person is come from happy family a...
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Sentence: Second factor of happiness that the research found is came from friends and society.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to is and came
Sentence: Although many factors of being happy are already studied, the definition of happiness itself is still cannot define clearly.
Description: The fragment is still cannot is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace still with adjective
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No. of Different Words: 149 200
Sentence Length SD: 3.583 7.5
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 315 350
No. of Characters: 1488 1500
No. of Different Words: 149 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.213 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.724 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.202 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.529 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.583 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.562 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5