Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to make a complaint regarding an accident happened to me when I was shopping in the supermarket today.
My name is Jim and I am a frequent customer of the grocery. I routinly come to the supermarket to purchase food and daily necessities every week. I prefer this supermarket because of the convenient self check-out facilities, which saves me much time.
However, I got hurt in fresh food aisle at around 3 PM. I was randomly looking at goods on selves at both side of the aisle while pushing my trolley forward. Suddenly, I stepped on something slippery and lost my balance. I fell on the ground with all my purchase on floor. I hurt my right elbow.
After I recovered myself and stood up, I found that I stepped on a mess of broken eggs. My elbow bruised a bit but not serious. I hope this accident will never happen again. You can arrange a person specificly for reporting this.
Hope you consider my suggestion.
Yours faithfully
Jim Pan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it but not serious. I hope this accident will never happen again. You can arrange...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6384180791 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70611443146 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5023808624 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.7333333333 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152925879874 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444481296629 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457646393561 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091101800008 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460474264474 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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