Shopping is one famous activity, that increase highly in this era. Many people choose to buy their necessary in modern store, however, others prefer to browse at the local market. Indeed, both of that place have prosperity for the customer.
There are several benefits for people who accumulate their compulsory in shopping centers. Modern shop has the unique design that can change buyer moods. When people who already work in one day visit the shopping mall, they will feel tired and not interested at the first time, but the unique designs make them comfortable and enjoy their activity to f...
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Sentence: Moreover, the customer can obtains fresh product too in local market because the seller over there, directly sell the product after they take it from the source.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to can and obtains
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