whether or not people think spending a lot on holding wedding parties is a wast of money. However, in my opinion I think spending a lot to hold wedding parties is not necessary. Reason for saying spending a lot to hold wedding parties is not necessary will be discuss in this essay.
one of the reason for not spending a lot on wedding is lack of spending fund. Today, many intending couples do not have enough spending fund for their daily living. Though, they want to gain respect from their friends and family, as a result of spending a lot in their wedding. In addition, they borrow some money from the bank in other to cover their wedding cost forgetting that what is important in marriage is love not big parties. Beside,they have to pay back to bank after wedding. But, when they can no longer cope with the interested rate, they have to pay to the bank this can lead to depression, disappointment and family issues.
Meanwhile, some people think that wedding is done once in a life time so it important for people to hold a big wedding. Which is true, wedding happened once in a life time and can be celebrated big if both couples are financial stable. Otherwise, if they are not stable, they should not think of big wedding. Because big wedding should be left for celebrities who have nothing to do with money but to always waste it on parties and club.
If newly wedded couples should get money from the bank to cover up for wedding how will they feed comfortable while still paying back to the bank? Intending couples wanting to get married should always think of the cost associated with their wedding and spend according to their income to prevent after wedding debt.
In conclusion, parent should advice their children that are getting married about the dangers associated with starting a family life with debt. Also, intending couples should be meticulous about spending a lot on holding wedding parties because is waste of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whether
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Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
whether or not people think spending a lot on h...
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Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...le think that wedding is done once in a life time so it important for people to hold a bi...
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...ich is true, wedding happened once in a life time and can be celebrated big if both coupl...
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Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
... debt. In conclusion, parent should advice their children that are getting married...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72011661808 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41639786808 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440233236152 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2572917644 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2352941176 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317038603876 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135651232566 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120406611687 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205886565173 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13610923163 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.