You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish
to complain to the supermarket.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Jale, I have encountered with a minor accident in the supermarket and I hope you can help me with this one.
As I turned myself in a corner, another customer rushed directly into my face and I got hurt so badly straight to the ground. Although that young man apologised to me and I accepted it, I discovered similar cases happen frequently that you have to be slow and careful enough to protect yourself from blind corners.
As a customer, I sincerely hope I can be a part of improving the shopping environment. There are too many blind spots in the supermarket, hence danger exists within these blind spots. To create more transparency in every lane, some extra penetrated holes on shelters can give customers more information about the surroundings, therefore a lot of blind spots can be minimized to reduce the danger.
Kind Regards,
Jale
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wishto complain to the supermarket. 89
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wishto complain to the supermarket. 61
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wishto complain to the supermarket. 89
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. 89
- You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jale, I have encountered with...
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... I hope you can help me with this one. As I turned myself in a corner, anot...
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...o protect yourself from blind corners. As a customer, I sincerely hope I ca...
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...n be minimized to reduce the danger. Kind Regards, Jale
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Suggestion:
...duce the danger. Kind Regards, Jale
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78431372549 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78805480664 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699346405229 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0271469888 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143413982574 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547438546727 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070985883789 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112018449517 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860949421447 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.