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The table illustrades the percentage of travelers at a main urban airport about the intent of their journey during March, June, September, December in 2002.
It can be clearly seen that these figures have considerable variations. The graph shows that the proportion of travelers for business is extremely high in March (73%). After 3 months, in June, it plummets to 29%. Also in this month, the number of the tourist who travel for holiday is the highest (54%), account for more than half, the reasons for this trend may involve the summer vacation and the blazing days in midyear. The lowest proportion is 18% in March.
Similarly, the rate of travelers visiting their family in March is reach the bottom, constituting 6% only. And the ratio surge in December with 26%. cause may be that the Christmas Eve and New Year Eve. In June and September, the percentages are 13% and 11% respectively.
Next, the other reasons remain hold a tiny number of rate, approximately from 3% to 5%, throughout four different in 2002.
In conclusion, we can see that the situation of tourism in general depends fairly abundant on the reason for the trip and the time conditions in year.
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- The chart below show 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cause
...d the ratio surge in December with 26%. cause may be that the Christmas Eve and New Y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, similarly, so, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86069651741 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64139281742 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7974152079 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4166666667 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0217326646152 0.215688989381 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00864295927776 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286654530027 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00740937970374 0.15604864568 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148187594075 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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