Some people say part-time jobs are useful for full-time student because they not only earn money but also gain career experiences. Do you agree or disagree?
Working part-time job has become a common activity among students attending university or college because of the immense benefits that it brings. However, working part-time can potentially be more of a plague than a boom depending on circumstances.
The first obvious advantage is extra source of income. Most of the times, higher-education students rely on loan or financial support from government to pay tuition fee. Other times, students attending foreign institution are subjected to international fee which is several times higher than domestic. Therefore, earning living expense from work he...
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Essay evaluation report
Therefore, earning living expense from work helps relieving financial strains from their guardians and allow them to enjoy a more indulging lifestyle
Therefore, earning living expense from work helps relieving financial strains from their guardians and allows them to enjoy a more indulging lifestyle
to get desirable result.
to get a desirable result.
to get desirable results.
The consequences is poor academic performance which eventually follow them to their post-graduate career.
The consequences is poor academic performance which eventually follows them to their post-graduate career.
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flaws:
no serious flaws found.
It has a good structure with a polished language.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 295 350
No. of Characters: 1614 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.144 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.471 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.009 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.844 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.32 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to relieve' or 'relieve'.
Suggestion: to relieve; relieve
... earning living expense from work helps relieving financial strains from their guardians ...
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Line 7, column 326, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ficient time to study. The consequences is poor academic performance which eventua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63728813559 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08305038157 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1327981627 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.866666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255029249726 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854442502581 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657202405713 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144232762236 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371082044331 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.