Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are
the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
In modern life, people tend to have babies when they get older. There are some reasons for this tendency, and it not only impacts society but also family life.
To begin with, there are several reasons why a number of individuals want to have babies later in their life. One reason for this is that people spend many years on studying. After graduating from university, some people continue to learn master or doctor. An additional reason is that people are absorbed in working to earn money in young age and they decide to start raising a family after having enough money to ensure a better life for their children. The final reason why people have children late is that when they are young, they prefer to enjoy their life. For example, young people are interested in travelling because they can explore new things and enjoy the life. If they had children at young age, they would nurture them and have little time for themselves.
However, having babies later has an influence on society as well as family life. The first impact is that it causes a significant age gap between two generations. It is harder for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring. In addition to, if people give birth when they are too old, babies can face to less physically healthy.
In conclusion, there are many reasons why married couples prefer having children later in their life, and this can result in impacts on both their family and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to master'
Suggestion: to master
...iversity, some people continue to learn master or doctor. An additional reason is that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80478087649 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28905872459 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537848605578 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4171550739 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321689239957 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128396851646 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884097429885 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224751859136 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463402004239 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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