The costs of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity in different countries?
As a result of today’s globalized world, the costs of traveling places has become more cheaper than before. As such, tourism industries are growing rapidly in many countries which has both positive and negative aspects; however, both sides will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, tourism industry has benefited not just the travelers but also many other sectors like hotels, restaurants, travel and tours companies and so on. For instance, huge tourism activity around Sydney Opera house has benefited thousands of local businesses. Moreover, such a trend are very likely t...
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You have suggested me to write more words but I have already crossed 250 words. The total word limit in task 2 IELTS essay is 250.
250 words are the minimum.
250 words are the minimum. Better to have 350.
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No. of Words: 265 350
More words, higher marks. You have the potential to get 8.0 or more.
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 265 350
No. of Characters: 1430 1500
No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.035 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.396 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.766 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.096 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.023 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5