Dear John
I hope you are doing great and everybody at home is good too. I am glad to hear that you are interested in knowing about the presidential elections that are making headlines these days. I will be happy to give you the insights of it.
The elections are the hottest news that everybody is following here currently, it is been two continuous terms that democrats are in office and they are doing quite well. However, populous is favouring republicans this time and most likely they will form a government and next president could be a republican member. There are many points of debate and manifesto has some big promises from both parties and election is gaining so much heat.
This time it is really interesting and people are showing their interest on optimum level and campaigning is very rigorous. Moreover, there are series of allegations on each other that made people curious. There are two months to go and the picture will be clear and the nation will elect its 51st president.
This is all that is going on here, thank you for writing me and l look forward to see you soon.
Yours truely
Param Sabharwal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s that are making headlines these days. I will be happy to give you the insights ...
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Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...k you for writing me and l look forward to see you soon. Yours truely Param Sabh...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.48453608247 307% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74371859296 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47473024604 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653266331658 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4625044339 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8181818182 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926883934628 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038598071593 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424363959835 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457258119882 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321982213326 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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