Living for today versus living for tomorrow.
Some people believe that we should have a specific plan for the future and try to implement it constantly. However, I guess they are wrong and all of those plans are based on speculation and even maybe don't happen at all. We aren't able to realize possible dangers and problems accurately which may occur in the future and sometimes one sudden event causes all of our plans would be destroyed. In addition, living for the future is replete with stress and worry about what will happen tomorrow. Therefore, we should be careful about the value of our times now and enjoy every moment of our life, maybe we won't be tomorrow.
First of all, I would like to state more about advantages of living for today. As you know, our life is full of unpredictable and unexpected events such as passing away of close relatives, economic problems and excessive inflation or even natural disaster including earthquake and flood which maybe change our life quite. If each of these issues occurs, It'll destroy all your efforts that you have done to build your future. Thus, because of this fact that we only live once and it is also impossible to know what will happen in the future, we should enjoy all of the things even small happiness that we have at the moment and not waste our time by thinking ahead.
In addition, living for tomorrow always is accompanied by stress. People who living for future usually concerned themselves with their desires and needs. They are always attempting to improve future but actually in this way they ruin not only today but also may lose their future. Stress causes you can not do your activities very well and definitely won't achieve your desirable goals in the future. Moreover, with the stress and worry about the future, you won't be able to enjoy pleasures of life at the present time. For example, although my uncle was very wealthy he didn't have tranquility at all and he was always in search of a way to gain more money. He seldom enjoyed his wealth. Unfortunately, two years ago in an accident, he severely injured and lost most of his wealth due to excessive treatment costs and finally, he passed away last year without any pleasure in his life.
All in all, I prefer to live for today and have a tranquil life with small happiness rather than living for tomorrow that is full of stress and based on speculation. In my opinion, we should not waste our life today in order to build the future in which no one is aware of it.Thus, eventually I would like to finish my essay with a quote from a great writer, he said: ''many people lose the small joys, in hope for big happiness'.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i guess, in addition, such as, you know, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61814345992 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34451221457 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497890295359 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4884789381 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.45 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.65 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115925646203 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427727093701 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407018554157 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604480095904 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435645842186 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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