What famous place would you like to visit?
What famous place would you like to visit?
I have itchy feet. I love travelling. I have been travelling all my life. However, there are a lot of incredible places that I have never seen yet and I really like to visit them as soon as possible. One of them is Naghsh-e-Jahan square, located in Esfahan. There are some reasons that tempt me to prefer to visit the Naghsh-e-Jahan.
First of all, I think it is one of the most beautiful tourist attractions in Iran. It is an astonishing historical place that was built in Safavid era, during Shah Abbas dynasty. Its architecture is marvelous. There are some eye-catching fountains in the middle of the square that attract any visitor. Their blue color is very relaxing and sitting around fountains is tranquilizing. For example, last summer my friend was there with his family. All of them still talk about the relaxing atmosphere near the fountains.
In addition, Naghsh-e-Jahan is located downtown so I can easily visit it more and more during my trip. It covers a wide area which enables the Naghshe-Jahan to include many extra facilities such as ancient markets that is amazing for both tourists and local people. Esfahan is famous for its excellent handicrafts, so personally I think each tourist should buy some of them as souvenirs. Furthermore, there are many funny activities in Naghshe-Jahan too. For instance, there are some cute carriages in the square that carry the visitors and give them an exciting ride.
All in all, I really like to visit Naghsh-e-Jahan. It is very exciting, because it has many amazing characteristics like ancient architecture, relaxing environment and beautiful souvenirs. I think people of all ages can enjoy visiting this beautiful place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I have itchy feet. I love travelling. I have been travelling all my life. Howev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04513888889 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01087719148 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7394558642 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0454545455 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0909090909 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243321692423 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797277626229 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207872488399 0.0737576698707 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27232236295 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.367955024077 0.0645574589148 570% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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