Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)
Celebrities and sportspersons are a role model for today's youth. I am totally agree with above statement because today the influance of such big stars is much more effective than any other person. This essay will discuss about possible reasons for this trend with examples.
Firstly, today sports and entertainment are the top choices for youngsters to spend their spare time. Millions of youngsters blindly follow style, look and body language of sportspersons and film stars. For example, in India, every film of successful stars gains on average 100 crores of rupees, even though the story is not upto the mark. Hence, successful celebrities play vital role to guide today's youngsters to right direction.
Secondly, film stars and sportspersons are called as a youth icon. They are the intiators of latest and unique fashion trends. Therefore, they can easily attract millions of youngsters without much efforts. Youngsters want to do something different and unique which can differentiate them from normal people. For instance, many marketing companies endorse these successful people for their products so that they can target young audiance. Thus, successful celebrities are a youth icon for the young generation.
In conclusion, every successful celebrity has millions of followers which blindly copy the lifestyle of a star. So, it is the responsibility of a star to guide them on right direction and keep these followers happy and entertained.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...le model for todays youth. I am totally agree with above statement because today the ...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... attract millions of youngsters without much efforts. Youngsters want to do somethin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38427947598 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85667630839 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9737640112 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.2 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277817690352 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863004343185 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565086866935 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158928432497 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226014122479 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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