Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree).
Sports play cardinal role in the life of people. In some countries people also shoe grate intrest in glamorous stars. They are represent our countries in front of the world. I totally agree that the young people see them as a role model and it is a good trend for a country.
Let’s begin by looking at the sportsmen point of view, One of the main positives is that sportsman do a lot of things for their nation such as play for nation national and international level and win countless prizes for the country. As a result they motivate youngsters to do something for the nation
Turning twowords the film stars, most of the popular film stars are spend most of their earning for charity work. Moreover, the movies they make have a great logic behind them. Young adults follow their lifestyle and do the things as they do.
To conclude, both the stars make the young people positive in their life which is important for the society as well as a single person. So I agree that youngsters should follow the stars and adopt some good habits of them.
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Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 1207.87684729 72% => OK
No of words: 190.0 242.827586207 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56842105263 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31863461589 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 379.143842365 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.57093596059 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4659566475 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271632897594 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944020358283 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634768301788 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150138094547 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252177974141 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 53.1260098522 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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