International community must ensure that all countries reduce the consumption of fossil fuels such as gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly believed that governments from all countries must ensure their people to decrease using fossil fuels such as gas and oil due to their emission of the greenhouse gas. From my perspective, I strongly believed that they should apply the solution on cutting down the consumption of fossil fuels around the world for many reasons.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that fossil fuels’s consumption is one of the main reasons leading to global warming and other environmental challenges. Moreover, curent booming population results in significant number of transportations are being used worldwide. To be specific, tons of exhauted fumes and danger smokes have been pulled out in every part of the world. That is the reasons why a huge number of environmental problems have been alarmed recently such as green house effects, global warming and ice melting in all poles.
On the other hand, the amount of fossil fuels in all over the world is being overused. Each kind of fossil fuels energies needs millions of years to transform; therefore, with an enormous demand from mankind, it will result in the outstocked energy in the future. Furthermore, technologies in producing alternative power resources have not reached the goal of replacing fossil fuels. One more thing is that although each nation owns its government budget spending on detering green issues, finding an alternative power is still somewhat utterly expensive.
In conclusion, it is critical that the International Community should take actions urgently to decrease the consumption of fossil fuels and other harmful energy in all nations. By doing that, we human may reach the betterment of living standard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27306273063 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85873805614 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8076270965 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25240242098 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816233083914 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856785244993 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15234876439 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799903783993 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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