Universities and colleges are the place where a student spends most crucial part of his life exploring on his interests, ideas and dealing with many varied things. Education along with sports and social activities contributes to the holistic development of an individual. So, it is important to receive equal financial support for that as well.
Education is the key to Success. But, education alone is not Success. A student gets to know himself and finds the right path for his future when he tries out many risky activities and performs things that is eccentric and not prevalent. One of the best example for this is the world famous cricket player Sachin Tendulkar who did not excel in his studies, but definitely had centuries in most of his test matches. By this, I would say that, if a student is very keen about a particular sport, and chooses sports as his future, by playing sports in college, one can mend himself to be a better and successful person as a sports player.
In addition, playing Sports is a fringe benefit as it helps to sharpen the mind, makes a person to think faster and better, which adds on to his better performance in the academics. Lots of personal, social and health benefits are gained through this. Perhaps, not surprisingly, people who play sports are more active than others. It is an escape from peer pressure and a stress relief for some as well.
Admittedly, it is conspicuous that spending money on classes and libraries benefits by giving better knowledge to the students. In light to this, I would like to add on the fact that performing social activities contributes to the development of every individual while entering the real world. It helps to improve the communication skills, eye contact is improved which tells that a person has the ability to listen and also deliver the matter confidently.
Finally, I conclude that the above examples show the importance of sports and social activities and are abreast with education in a student's life in University.
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 76
- TPO-05 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.Use specific reasons and examples to suppo 73
- TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...nt is very keen about a particular sport,and chooses sports as his future, by playin...
^^^^
Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... be a better and successful person as a sports player. In addition, playing Sports ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sharpen'.
Suggestion: sharpen
...orts is a fringe benefit as it helps to sharpens the mind, makes a person to think faste...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 133, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ies and are abreast with education in a students life in University.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93841642229 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73083046097 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563049853372 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.150432712 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15068404329 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528074006264 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575087612042 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977884301686 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538485070681 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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