TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

We all should agree that world is changing faster than ever and also way better than the past. Technology is so advanced these days that everything is easily accessible to us. So, I would undoubtedly agree that Life today is much easier when compared to decades back and here are the following reasons I would like to put forward.

First and foremost, as I already mentioned about easy access, it is possible only because of the development in every field of medical, engineering and technology. One of the best inventions' is the Super Computers and mobile phones along with internet access which has made our job easier, faster and more efficient. An instance to share how the world is in our hands is, in order to plan a trip abroad at the right time, weather forecast, availability of rooms and every single detail can be known through the access to the internet. Information is browsed instantaneously through Google about every corner of the world which was not possible in olden days.

Secondly, advancement in the medical field is mind-blowing due to funding in the research and developments in the past decades which is unprecedented. OF course, it is our elders who laid stepping stone for these advancements. An example would be the treatments for cancer which are available now were not available in olden days. I should say that the improvement in this field has led to longevity of mankind.

In addition, not to forget the advancements in the field of transportation, which has made the possibility to fly anywhere in the world and it is magnificent. However, they are pros and cons in every technological development. Improvements and risk abreast with each other. For instance, invention of flights' is a boon to mankind as it saves a lot of time in long distance travel and as told about advancements, the risk factor is equally high.

To encapsulate, the development in the field of Science and Technology, Maths and Engineering, Life today is much easier when compared to olden days.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in addition, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92058823529 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92834111075 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555882352941 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6716798875 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108993720219 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332889246599 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441751898884 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668633381465 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554520737718 0.0645574589148 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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